Reflections on the Second draft and Peer reviews

This week's assignment was to submit the second draft of my literature review and do peer reviews. The second draft was a build up from the first draft that I submitted last week.

In this assignment, I looked at the feedback from Dr. Weaver. I felt that even though I had read the article on my topic, I did not synthesized enough into the draft. The flow of ideas was not very good. I am currently working on re-reading some of the articles to add contents to areas that I need to strengthen. I have printed a hard copy of my paper as this way I can identify and seal gaps in the flow of ideas. This works better for me.

Reading through my two peers work was very insightful for me as I had a better grasp of how to cite articles APA, how they synthesized their ideas, and how they linked them from to another.

At the same time, I have feedback from my two peers who reviewed my work. Their comments are very helpful at this time as I undertake the monumental task of addressing the areas that they pointed and also Dr. Weavers remarks on draft 2.

Currently, I am anticipating nothing short of a marathon for the next three to four days. I am not sure what strategy will work but I have to get this done well by July 2.

To my colleagues, thanks for your feedback and have a nice week finalizing your drafts.